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This is such a freaky story! It feels like it could easily be a scene in the HBO series White Lotus or the start of a writing prompt.

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Aug 17, 2022Liked by Caroline Donahue

So, I had this happen to me in Vegas and I did walk in on someone having sex- or two someone’s as the case may be. It was horrible and even 20 years later your message brought it all back. I loved your description of what you saw and took in about the state of the room. Love all the ideas flowing from you.

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Aug 12, 2022Liked by Caroline Donahue

Oh this is def full of creep-factor! There is a lot to unpack from this debacle - no apologies on the travel pun! I like the Pringle's reference, that is a great take-in from someone's else's bedroom habit. I have walked into an occupied room before too - it's very disconcerting. I can't wait to read how this might turn out.

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Aug 11, 2022Liked by Caroline Donahue

I was hooked on the pringles crumbs! Also loved the awkwardness of struggling to converse in a foreign language.

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Ooooh this might give me chills but it's got huge potential! :D

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